You've captured the very essence of the people who don't understand. You've managed to effectively portray the uniqueness of a bond one can form with a horse, and how much people can miss out on if they don't have that.
I really liked the reference to "just a sunrise" and "just a promise", it really makes the "just a horse" seem more effective. I mean, the meaning behind it.
Great - well done!
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